In a hospital somewhere in Europe, a woman lies on her bed, suffering. Her limbs are shriveled and quavering. She has only one kidney, and lives on dialysis everyday. Her food is liquidified as she cannot swallow. If only stem cells were allowed in medical research today....
In this millennium where the development of science is accelerating rapidly, stem cell research should not be barred. Conversely, more funds should be poured in to further ensure its progress. Although it can be said that the manipulation of stem cells is considered unethical as it appears to toy with life as a whole, the development of stem cell research will help save many lives by curing dieseases and improving the standard of living for many afflicted people. Stem cell research will also open up new possibilities in biological and biomechanical research in more fields such as sports and career. Most importantly, it is the way that stem cells are used that determines the positive or negative impact of whatever research that has been conducted.
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4 words for your intro:
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But the link is very clear after reading further, and the message is quite clearly brought across. Just that, perhaps, your introduction might need more elaboration so that the progression between "Her food is liquidified as she cannot swallow." and "If only stem cells were allowed in medical research today...."
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it,s a good example for those who want to start a commentary by a story.Your structure is good and your link is quite clear. however, you can make your story more vivid, but your need to control the length of it.
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